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摘要：

“As major cities around the world are growing fast, many problems occur. What problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?”

本周雅思作文問(wèn)的是城市擴(kuò)張給城市里的年輕人帶來(lái)了哪些問(wèn)題，如何解決這些問(wèn)題？

唐老師在雅思作文題庫(kù)中搜索后發(fā)現(xiàn)，本題是2014年9月16日和2010年8月14日的原題翻版，再次印證了唐老師的一個(gè)基本判斷：近期雅思作文容易復(fù)現(xiàn)2014年下半年和2015年上半年的原題。請(qǐng)各位烤鴨復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)注意抓。

城市擴(kuò)張，意味著越來(lái)越多的年輕人涌入城市，這會(huì)帶來(lái)什么樣的問(wèn)題？其實(shí)，稍微想一下，我們就能發(fā)現(xiàn)各種可能的問(wèn)題，比如就業(yè)壓力，住房壓力，交通擁堵，城市安全，子女教育等等。至于解決辦法，無(wú)非是擴(kuò)大就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，重視年輕人再教育問(wèn)題，甚至限制年輕人進(jìn)入大城市等等。

總體來(lái)說(shuō)，本周題目的難度并不大，這類(lèi)問(wèn)題也是我們平時(shí)都經(jīng)常討論和思考的，因此，本周作文比拼的可能還是在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)方面。

老師筆記

01

Now it seems that all the big cities around the world are still endlessly expanding. The population of Shanghai, for example, was just 10 million in 1990s, yet today the figure has soared up to 30 million. The cosmopolitan expansion means that more people, young people in particular, are rushing into the big cities and this may cause a host of problems.

現(xiàn)在，上所有的大城市似乎還在不斷擴(kuò)大。例如，上海的人口在1990年代只有1000萬(wàn)，但今天這個(gè)數(shù)字已經(jīng)飆升到了3000萬(wàn)。大城市的擴(kuò)張意味著更多的人，特別是年輕人，正涌向大城市，而這可能會(huì)引起許多問(wèn)題。

　　解析

　?。?）本段為引入段：用例子簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明大城市仍然在擴(kuò)張，這可能帶來(lái)問(wèn)題。

　　（2） expand 擴(kuò)張

　?。?） soar up 飆升

　?。?） cosmopolitan 性的(adj.)；大城市（n.）

　?。?）  a host of 許多 （=many)

02

The first problem that faces the young people in big cities is that a good job will become increasingly difficult to come by since the competition in the job market will surely intensify as young people, most of whom are well educated, decide to pursue their dreams in the big cities. It is now not uncommonthat a university position may attract more than 100 applicants. Secondly, as these young people settle down in the big cities, they will soon have their own family, which will impose great pressure on the city’s housing. In fact, this is exactly one of the major reasons why housing in the big cities today is so expensive. Then, when their children reach the school age, they will find it hard to get them into school, because the educational resources are very limited. Finally, a large number of young people living under great pressure in the big cities may bring about such social problems as unemployment and crimes.

大城市的年輕人面臨的個(gè)問(wèn)題是，一份好工作將變得越來(lái)越難以獲得，因?yàn)殡S著年輕人（多數(shù)都受過(guò)良好的教育）決定在大城市里追求自己的夢(mèng)想，就業(yè)市場(chǎng)上的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)必將加劇?，F(xiàn)在，一個(gè)的職位可能吸引超過(guò)100名申請(qǐng)者，這已屢見(jiàn)不鮮。其次，隨著這些年輕人在大城市穩(wěn)定下來(lái)，他們很快會(huì)有自己的家庭，這將給城市住房帶來(lái)產(chǎn)生很大的壓力。事實(shí)上，這正是大城市里住房如此昂貴主要原因。而且，當(dāng)他們的孩子到了上學(xué)的年齡，他們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很難讓他們進(jìn)入學(xué)校，因?yàn)榻逃Y源非常有限。后，大批年輕人生活在大城市里的巨大壓力下，可能會(huì)帶來(lái)的失業(yè)和犯罪等社會(huì)問(wèn)題。

　　解析

　　(1) 本段論述年輕人生活在大城市帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題，主要討論了三個(gè)問(wèn)題：就業(yè)問(wèn)題、住房和子女教育問(wèn)題、社會(huì)問(wèn)題（沒(méi)有展開(kāi)論述）。

　　(2) face 面對(duì)

　　(3) come by 獲得；得到

　　(4) intensify 加劇

　　(5) pursue 追求

　　(6) not uncommon 不罕見(jiàn)

　　(7) impose...on... 強(qiáng)加......在......身上

　　(8) educational resources 教育資源

03

To solve these problems, I would suggest that the government take measures to limit the number of people migrating into the big cities. In fact, cities like New York and Beijing have already set standards for those who want to come in. Meanwhile, it is highly advisable that the government offer practical programs so that the young people living in the big cities can receive further education to make them more competitive in the job market. The most essential thing that the government should do, of course, is develop a strong economy, which is the most effective cure for the diseases in the big cities.

為了解決這些問(wèn)題，我建議采取措施限制遷入大城市的人數(shù)。事實(shí)上，像紐約和北京這樣的城市已經(jīng)建立了準(zhǔn)入標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。同時(shí)，應(yīng)提供切實(shí)可行的計(jì)劃，使住在大城市的年輕人能夠接受更多的教育，讓他們?cè)诰蜆I(yè)市場(chǎng)更有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。當(dāng)然，應(yīng)該做的重要的事情是建立一個(gè)強(qiáng)大的經(jīng)濟(jì)，這是治療大城市疾病的有效辦法。

　　解析

　　(1) 本段針對(duì)前面的問(wèn)題提出解決方法。

　　(2) migrate 遷徙

　　(3) set standards 制定標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

　　(4) advisable 明智的，適當(dāng)?shù)?/p>

　　(5) essential 重要的